Thursday, June 6, 2019

Persimmons
When I ate my persimmon it crunched like an apple.
  Crunchy, smooth, round, persimmons.
The perfect persimmons taste tariffic.
   Why do persimmons have big stars in the middle of them?,
The seeds are so BIG!!!
 I nervously chewed and swallowed with a big “ Gulp ”.

 When I bit into my persimmon it crunched and juice flew
out to the sides of my mouth.
The juice slid down the back of my throat,
giving me vitamins, minerals, fiber and ENERGY!

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 6, 2019 at 3:13 PM

    Yesterday we ate and drew PERSIMMONS.
    This is my drawing of a persimmon.

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  2. Miss ForsterJune 6, 2019 at 4:44 PM

    Maddisyn well done you said what we did. Next time say what you like about your work and what you would do different next time.

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  3. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 5:32 PM

    26.06.19
    I really like the doc about your persimmons and I like how you drew your picture and told people about what it did when you ate it and what it does. (E.G giving me vitamins, minerals, fiber and ENERGY!)
    How long does it take?
    When did you do it?
    Do you think it is cool?
    What is your favourite font?

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