Thursday, May 2, 2019

                             POETRY

What is the ocean???

a home to salt water fish, 
to give us oxygen from the plants,
a place of life and death,
to dive for crayfish,

for dolphins, turtles, whales, jelly fish and kelp,

a variety of spiecies, so we can cool of on hot days,
the ocean is very vast,

Thats the ocean

The moon.

Midnight on the moon,
where all the aliens play,
as the rocket lands.


I learnt what definishion poetry is its wher you describe what your writing about but not tell its like show not tell.

something that I could better next time is I could write more dicribing words in my (whats the ocean???) poetry.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you have used a lit of describing words,I like the alien sentence,next time put a little more full stops

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